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I can see behind that fake smile
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I can see past that fake smile
And those thoughtz that go on for miles
I truly do understand your pain
I know that deep down it drives you insane
I just hope that you finally realize
That between you and me
There's no need for lies
You can tell me anything
And I'll be there listening
Through thick and thin
I'll be there right down to the end!
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WestCPunk
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2004-07-19 19:14:57]
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Re: I can see behind that fake smile
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:15:08 AM AEST
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Quite a simple poem.
It's sweet. |
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Re: I can see behind that fake smile
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:44:49 AM AEST
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Reminds me of me...I can see past fake smiles too....i feel people's pain as if it's mine...
great job bro!
please comment on my work too
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