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I wish I was there
Contributed by
8kiwi8
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I look up and stare at the tiny dotted stars which create pictures and stories in the dark navy blanket
I look to my right and he's there next to me
I look to my left and she's back with me again
I look ahead of me and see the shiny skin of the ocean glistening into the horizon
I look behind me and they're there for me
I don't care what's underneath me
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2004-07-19 17:55:25]
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Re: I wish I was there
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by diamond_tears on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:00:09 PM AEST
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| wow wow wow.. i was welling up. it was so beautiful!! xxxx |
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Re: I wish I was there
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:08:04 PM AEST
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| heh, last but made me laugh. i like it =) |
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Re: I wish I was there
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by PurpleMoonJuice on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:35:27 PM AEST
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wow, that was really good,
damn you i wish i could write poems :P
Vicki xx |
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