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Pain flowing through her head
Contributed by
diamond_tears
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:35:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Pain flowing through her head
Flooding her heart.
Swamped by the images
Of her childhood,
Of her past.
Knowing she can’t escape,
The flashbacks.
Attacking her tears,
Till they break down,
And fall.
Raindrops from her eyes,
Crashing at her feet.
Leaving her blinded,
By the poison,
By the hurt.
Hiding beneath her scars,
Burying herself.
Inside her head,
Hoping to become numb,
To be free.
Cowering from the truth,
Curling up,
Escaping her thoughts.
Hoping for an end,
To this life.
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Re: Pain flowing through her head
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by 8kiwi8 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:06:37 PM AEST
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look im the first commenter :-)
i loved these lines:
Attacking her tears
Raindrops from her eyes
Hiding beneath her scars
Cowering from the truth,
the whole things really cool, i dont know exactly what to say but i know what i'm thinking lol! its a really really good poem but please don't do what the last line says i love youuuu :'( ....well done! luvya x x x x kiwi |
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Re: Pain flowing through her head
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by PurpleMoonJuice on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:09:06 PM AEST
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Hey joooooooooo
great poem, liked the 4th stanza best :P
love yooooooooooou
Vicki xx |
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Re: Pain flowing through her head
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:26:07 AM AEST
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Very good bro!....we all seem to try to hide from the pain in our head but it will never go away...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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