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Love Me
Contributed by
lostlove
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:40:39 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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You tell me you love me
But you still love another
You tell me you love me
But you tell me to go
You expect me to love
Love what is no longer mine
You take for granted
All feelings laid on the floor
To be battered and broken
You tell me you love me
But you still love another
You tell me you love me
But you tell me to go
I feel my heart race
Race with anger and fear
I don’t want to lose
Lose what I long to have
For it is all I have
You tell me you love me
But you still love another
You tell me you love me
But you tell me to go
My eyes tainted red
My tongue encrusted in blood
I see a heart, so tasty
I see the blood, so thirsty
Relieve the anger inside
You tell me you love me
But you still love another
You tell me you love me
But you tell me to go
No longer with me
No longer with you
Take the time to taste
Taste the blood
Blood of sanity
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lostlove
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2004-07-19 13:40:39]
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Re: Love Me
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:42:58 PM AEST
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| losing love is so painful * hugs you* |
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Re: Love Me
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by emospaztic on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:50:31 PM AEST
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| Repetition is very powerful, but there was a little much in this work, unless these are lyrics. These would make very cool lyrics. |
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