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Cry Silently
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I must remind myself, "I am here"
I try to remember you aren't near.
Sometimes the realization crushes me...
and I go into myself, cry silently.
I must remind myself that "you are gone"
during the storms when all seems wrong.
You aren't there to comfort me...
and I go into myself, cry silently.
I must remind myself that "time heals all"
though you aren't there to catch me when I fall.
I hold on to you, though you're just a memory...
and I go into myself, cry silently.
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2004-07-19 13:28:41]
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Re: Cry Silently
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:30:10 PM AEST
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| awwwwww i hope yo feel better love great write |
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Re: Cry Silently
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by Dawny on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:29:59 PM AEST
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Awhhh, this has such beautiful imagery. I love the way you use the same line to end each stanza, fantastic poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Cry Silently
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:32:30 PM AEST
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awww... so sad... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Cry Silently
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by Jacoba on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:03:57 PM AEST
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A very nice poem, but still very sad. Beautiful imagery, I enjoyed reading this.
~Jacoba |
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Re: Cry Silently
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by white_rain_angel on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:19:27 PM AEST
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im really sorry that you had to go through this. it was a beautiful poem, and a good write too. when something happens to me, i can not show my emotions, i hide my feelings, that only makes things worse, trust me you don't wanna go there, once it happens you can't just stop. But i know from hiding my emotions its killing me slowly and pianfully inside. Im sorry for your loss
-good write, very beautiful-
always traci lynn |
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Re: Cry Silently
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:08:39 AM AEST
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very sad. i really like how it written. very nicely done.
your rhyme was good. all in all this was amazing. still trying to get over your last write though lol
loved this one.
Arden |
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