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The Morning After
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:02:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The morning after I ruined our love
was the worse day of my life
Going against what was written above,
the morning after, I realized I am not a wife...
All because my lustful mind had taken over me
I threw all caution to the wind
Not until the morning after did I begin to see
What I had done the night before had caused my world to end
The morning after, when I saw all that I had done...
trying to remember all I did...
I hate to see what I've become...
Since the morning after, I have hid...
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
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2004-07-19 13:02:37]
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Re: The Morning After
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:06:36 PM AEST
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| i wonder if my dad feels the same way hes cheated on my mom so many fu**ing times and shes still with him God sorry got a little heated there great write |
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Re: The Morning After
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by C2C on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:07:42 PM AEST
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ay, a tough situation. Your poem makes me squirm just thinking what a tough situation that is. Hard on both people. Good write.
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: The Morning After
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:09:19 PM AEST
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aww this is very moving, hope that you can both rebuild your lives,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:18:38 PM AEST
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I feel your pain of guilt. It is very evident through these words, and I hope you can come to terms with it one day, if you haven't already.
Keep writing. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Dawny on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:32:07 PM AEST
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Your guilt is very evident here.This must be a horrible situation to be caught in, and I hope you can rebuild your love and trust.
Very descriptive and emotional poem, I liked this alot
Love Dawny xx |
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