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I'm a real girl
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:22:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm your puppet,
dangling by strings,
hands manipulating me,
pushing my feet to the floor.
Violin music playing,
your forever controlling my heart,
wooden limbs keep still,
Eternal frozen state.
Pale colourless eyes,
never moving to see,
infront of me could be anything,
only you know where i go.
I wish it wasnt like this,
i'm not something thats used,
empty enjoyment fills you,
dropping me on the floor.
No matter what you say,
I wont be your puppet no longer,
I'm sick of wooden promises,
'cos im a real girl.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
... [
2004-07-19 12:22:15]
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Re: I'm a real girl
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by carmen_queasy on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:30:33 PM AEST
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| I like the idea behind this, it's very cute :) good poem. |
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Re: I'm a real girl
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by kammie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:42:07 PM AEST
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it was excellent it kinda made me see that if the lad i like would do something like try to control me i would let him the problem with me is he said im too young for him ! you show that guy whos boss and kick his ass into shape or you could just dump him !!
kammie xx |
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Re: I'm a real girl
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:01:35 PM AEST
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| brilliant!!! i am a puppet to same and i hate it |
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Re: I'm a real girl
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by 01_zanzebar on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:59:14 PM AEST
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i love it :D (say what you want) girls now get so confused by the influences and thoughts, action and words of other, they themselves find out the reality is not as sweet as the honey the bee's went to gather was. kammie, its hard for us guys to like young girls cos of the image it creates, but if he loves you, he'll forget your age ( i know)
well done : )
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