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Heavy Heart
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:44:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart’s hanging heavy in my chest,
Today I feel far from my best,
Can’t seem to muster a small smile,
If only for a moment or a while.
Things have taken their toll,
Leaving me feeling tired & old,
Normally I just get right back up,
But life has managed to smash my cup.
Feel like I don’t have any friends,
To help me out of these tight bends,
I feel deserted on another planet,
I hate feeling this way Damn it!!
Can’t seem to shake this feeling,
It’s sharp & it begins peeling,
Away at the walls of my bleeding heart,
Tearing & ripping it slowly apart.
My head is a vast empty space,
Dark thoughts around it race,
Banging about like bumper cars,
Until in front of my eyes I can see stars.
Can’t dust myself off this time,
Don’t have the strength to once again climb,
Out of this big, dark ,black hole,
That is suffocating my soul.
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pixie
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2004-07-19 10:44:46]
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:31:08 AM AEST
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| I really, really like this poem I have felt this way many times Thanks for writing something so close to my heart. |
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by carmen_queasy on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:16:24 PM AEST
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| I'm really sorry you're feeling so bad at the moment, Pixie. *hugs* |
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by little_genna on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:40:03 PM AEST
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Pixie baby this was such a heart rendering out pour of your precious emotions. thnak you so much for sharing babe. this was just so heartfelt and close to home. *hugs you tight*
Gen xx |
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:46:19 PM AEST
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awww.......... *its always darkest before the dawn* see you on msn, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:14:14 PM AEST
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| I've had days like these when being happy or smiling was such a chore. I liked the poem, definitely something I could relate to. |
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Re: Heavy Heart
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:43:48 PM AEST
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| Ineed something I can relate to though I'm only fourteen. Life is full of stress but in the heaven makes everything good again. Or atleast I would believe that if I wasn't athiest. |
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