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The Calm & The Storm
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:43:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the storm, Mark’s the calm,
I am the one who causes harm,
They say opposites attract,
Compliment how the other reacts.
It’s no fun being the storm,
Leaving loved ones feeling worn,
I would love to be a calm river,
Just with words of love to deliver.
But my storm is big & mighty,
It holds onto me so tightly,
I try so hard to break free,
It is the calm I want to be.
I can consume all who are close,
Leave them empty like a ghost,
I scare myself with my tidal wave,
To overcome it I have to be brave.
My bolt crackles like lightning,
For everyone involved can be frightening,
I am the storm, Mark’s the calm,
I love him, but keep causing him harm.
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Re: The Calm & The Storm
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:16:34 AM AEST
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| Good write now all you need to do is figure how to let the storm subside.Way easier said than done. |
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Re: The Calm & The Storm
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by Stitch on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:29:23 AM AEST
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Being aware of the problem is the first step toward change. You are on your way. This lays out clearly the way you see things. I like your use of rhyme as well.
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Re: The Calm & The Storm
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by freespirit on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:07:57 PM AEST
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Well written I have a daughter that felt the same way she had a realy hard time for years
untill one day I told her to hand it all over to God she said how mom I told her put your hands out and say god I dont want to be this way amy more please take this from me
and now today she is at last free to live with out all the storms that raged in side her
May god bless you always hugs
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Re: The Calm & The Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:39:31 PM AEST
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it is with a great passion you live, and a great passion with which you write, your heart and soul are genuine; you will find that peaceful flow in life as well, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Calm & The Storm
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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You've realized the problem and now you can work on the solution.
The storm and calm, great symbols. |
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