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Angels Cry In Vain
Contributed by
Steven_Fenton1982
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:07:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Will we ever see the blue sea,
that washes over these blood stained shores?
Will we ever see the silver side of Heaven,
through the black sky above?
Above broken land,
beyond darkened clouds.
Angels cry down,
to douse flames of hatred.
Their platinum tears,
distinguish for so long.
But like an everlasting candle,
our burning rage lives on.
The Angels cry down on us in vain,
for our dreams have now become our pain.
Copyright ©
Steven_Fenton1982
... [
2004-07-19 09:07:25]
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Re: Angels Cry In Vain
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:15:19 AM AEST
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great write, it didnt really strike me as angry, but I really liked it.
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Angels Cry In Vain
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by Ronald on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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| Hey, I definitely like this one. I really enjoyd this. Great poem! 4.9/5.0 |
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Re: Angels Cry In Vain
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by iluvpencils on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:21:10 PM AEST
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Very sad but packed with emotion. I liked it. Thank you.
-Claire |
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