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°°°Bed of Comfort°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Bed so warm, i'm jealous of you
Laying in the dark, with him loving you
You cover him softly, releasing his mind
His eyes close softly, you are so kind
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How can i compare, does it matter what i say?
Your filled with water, you rock and sway
Bed of comfort what are you like?
Is it possible that you do everything right?
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Why does he depend on you when he is blue?
Is it the way you dont speak? Never saying i love you?
Do you kiss him at night, and kiss his cheek?
Or is it the way you lay still when he sleeps?
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Waterbed when you move, he moves with you
Can you make him smile when he needs you?
You hold his secrets, angers and fears
You hold him real close, and soak up his tears
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Tell me bed of comfort how can i be like you?
To do wonderful things for him that you do?
Do you kiss his lips when he needs a kiss?
Is this something i've failed at and missed?
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Do you let him feel how warm you are?
Do you hold the reflection of the moon and stars?
I hope you never give him bad dreams at night
I hope you keep him safe, even in the daylight
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You are what i fear, something i don't go near
You keep me awake, with bad dreams and tears
You don't comfort me like you do him
You make it real cold and dark and dim
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Bed of comfort, i stay away from you
I sit in the dark, that's what i choose
Bed of comfort i'm jealous of you
I want your comfort when i am blue
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Re: °°°Bed of Comfort°°°
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by viola on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:43:30 PM AEST
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| the thoughts you plant. my teddy Felix comforts me. |
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Re: °°°Bed of Comfort°°°
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 11:52:50 PM AEST
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| I don't know why but I have tears in my eyes from reading this.... beautiful!! |
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Re: °°°Bed of Comfort°°°
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:36:37 AM AEST
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| very nice, beds like those need burned dont they?? |
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Re: °°°Bed of Comfort°°°
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by shepdog1972 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:40:15 PM AEST
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You have a way with words that is really rare... I rwally enjoy reading your poems ....i am trying to only read one or two a nite so they will last a while.....i hope that you continue to write more so i can read more!!!! thanks for sharing
john |
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Re: °°°Bed of Comfort°°°
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by Chenobi on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 03:43:27 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful. You've touched me with this. I don't know the comfort of a bed. I wake up with pains in my neck every morning. That's why I enjoy strange beds. So I can relate to the longing of it, if you know what I mean. Very good write. Keep it up. |
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