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I Pray
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Look to the sage covered desert,
stand in the morning sun.
Knowing an imperfect body,
all flawless in sight.
Purple hues grant silence,
thoughts have me so small.
Hunger wells with a bitter taste,
grant me peace I pray...
before I must bow,
to one last sin.......Crow
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Re: I Pray
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:51:07 AM AEST
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| Awesome piece....... you zre still of one my favorite poets Crow...... Peace be with you! Magnificant write! |
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Re: I Pray
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:57:35 AM AEST
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as always well written and though provoking
Shari |
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Re: I Pray
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:04:16 AM AEST
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| very nicely written piece........ |
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Re: I Pray
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:23:32 AM AEST
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| Perfection is such a harsh thing. This was a great piece, I enjoyed reading it |
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Re: I Pray
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:38:35 AM AEST
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| quite thought provoking- nice work. |
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Re: I Pray
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:18:02 AM AEST
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A trying time for you..you speak here of it well.
A simple walk,noticing,listening..and prayer.
Beautiful
Your Dove |
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