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life isent so bad
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:41:27 AM in AEST
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the days are short and life seems to long.
the hours go down and all hope for love is gone.
you leave the ones who care the most,
and stay with the ones you have nothing to give.
why live this way from day to day.
we laugh when things are funny and
cry when things go bad.
we get angery at God when things mess up
and blam it on him when things went bad
but in reality its our fault
get over there's nothing you can do.
just pick up where you left off and move on.
don't be like a record playin the same sad song.
brighten things up put a smile on your face
and this world won't seem like a really bad place.
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2004-07-19 01:41:27]
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Re: life isent so bad
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by clowns_can_burn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:51:25 AM AEST
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great write
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Re: life isent so bad
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:53:06 AM AEST
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Often the reason people are stuck in unhappiness is because they are so caught up in trying to assure their comfort. Alas, if people would see that leaving comfort behind can often be so much more fulfilling and exciting.
Nice work. You got me thinking.
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Re: life isent so bad
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:04:39 AM AEST
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That's a good way to look at it... You amaze me Michael. Nice one, kid.
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Re: life isent so bad
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by SuperGirl on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:58:00 PM AEST
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i'm glad to see you feel like that.....it makes me be able to live a little easier! ;) you did great!!
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