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Mistake
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:31:11 AM in AEST
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Waking up to see the plain white room
I'm so lost, but then I remember where I am
wishing and hoping to leave here soon
As I lay there, I just think "it was only one mistake"
I tell myself everyday
But really its all just fake
So I did make One mistake, but then it led to others
How can I say sorry to something that felt so good?
You feel that I should
No matter how long I am here
I will not lie about my mistakes feeling good
I have nothing to fear
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clowns_can_burn
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Re: Mistake
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:39:54 AM AEST
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touching write
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Re: Mistake
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:15:43 AM AEST
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| hmm yes very touching... |
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Re: Mistake
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by JT on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:34:14 AM AEST
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powerful. great write
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Re: Mistake
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:44:33 AM AEST
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it's very sad. just know that i feel the same way as you.
we shouldn't apoligise for giving over selfs happiness! |
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Re: Mistake
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:18:59 PM AEST
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Im curious, i'll play dumb
what was this mistake?
intriguing |
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Re: Mistake
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:52:04 PM AEST
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Woah, you have described all that is attractive about addiction here. They always feel soooooo good. Too bad in the end they destroy you. Having been there and back more than once. I can say that. Ouch. This is full of emotion and truth.
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