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Losing to Life
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:33:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Losing to Life
I'm telling you what I want
I'm telling you what I need
I'm telling you
What I want to see
What I want to be
Everything
I want to be compared
With what's thrown at me
I'm telling you
I'm going to succeed
Nothing can stop me
I'm everything I want to be
Whatever life throws at me
Will be obliterated
As I stand up to what I fear
Nothing will stop me
From succeeding again
I'm telling you
I cannot lose
Success is in my view
This pointless life
Is ending soon
As I reach for the life
I was denied before
The life I wanted
For so long
I'm no longer
Losing to life
I'm not losing
To what's inside
I fought to win
A better life
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Essentially9
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2004-07-18 22:33:15]
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Re: Losing to Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:46:00 PM AEST
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| AWESOME job! i love the message you send out here and the energy ...such a great job! i really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Losing to Life
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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Loved it.
a good strong and powerful message told in this.
a very great write. this deserves more then just 5 stars. but its all i can give.
well done. keep it up.
Arden |
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