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Insecurities
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Insecurities
What is this thing that
Screams in my ears,
That chants profanity
To my mind,
This thing that says
I should find a hole
And hide.
That haunts my memories,
And kills me slowly,
The thing inside me,
Burning lonely.
Disfiguring my self esteem.,
My attitude…
So well held?
The thing that whispers
Words I dwell.
That captivates my freedom
In pursuing happiness.
Locked in a dungeon
Of rusty walls of sadness.
Breathing fire into me,
Melting me into
Pain.
Showers me with doubts,
My mind threatens to go insane.
This thing that blurs my vision,
And goes into a state of amok
This thing that screams beside me,
Thrusting me into dark.
How intriguing that you ask,
What can this thing be?
My eyes will say it all :
My I N S E C U R I T E S
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2004-07-18 22:28:22]
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Re: Insecurities
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:10:53 PM AEST
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| You're right everyone has them. What a bummer they are. Excellent write tho, I can totally relate. |
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Re: Insecurities
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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you are so right. great job I surely can relate well with this poem. wonderful write.
Brandy |
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Re: Insecurities
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:43:09 AM AEST
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Yep my insecurities bite my bum sometimes and they can leave quite big dents in my skin too...... great write, Im sure we all can relte to your poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Insecurities
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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| Groovy. I get ya, babe. And thanx for the compliments on my own work!--the Moth |
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