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Cried So Hard
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Cried all night
Until my last breath
Let it all seep out
Every possible tear left
Just like you did
I wanted you to let me cry
But we faught about it
Faught until the end
I cried myself to "sleep"
I made it possible
Reaching suffocation by crying
I'm on the floor in a puddle
But not blood
My tears
The floor is drenched
I cried myself to "sleep"
It started out just a weep
Then progressed to a cry of death
Who knew crying could kill?
It does now....
It killed me emotionally
And now physically.....
I died by suffocation
Lack of air....
It's hard to breathe while crying
Crying suffocated me
I cried for my suicide
What about yours
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imlostbutloved69
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2004-07-18 20:02:49]
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Re: Cried So Hard
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:46:09 PM AEST
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| Ouch this is too painful, what about just forgiving one another it is hard to but atleast you will still be there for each other? |
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Re: Cried So Hard
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:14:24 AM AEST
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this is such a powerful write.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Cried So Hard
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by iluvpencils on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:48:50 PM AEST
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Wow. This is very moving. I'm so sorry for what you had to go through but this is an amazing piece of work. Thank you.
-Claire |
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