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lengthening shadows
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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what am i to do? i miss you darling, true,
when i could look in your eyes,
my heart felt butterflies,
i've a picture of you when we were happy,
when life was all ahead of us,
when we were young,
your arms so strong, your lips so sweet,
but where were we going? not ever knowing the way,
riding the highway of life that took you away,
love is love, until the end of reckoning,
our mortal journeys are over all too soon,
lengthening shadows on my soul fall from the moon,
love for you still lives in my every heartbeat,
so glad we did not say goodbyes,
just a see you later; your eyes,
so beautiful and loving,
they were brown and i am blue,
evermore knowing lonely,
since i lost you.
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ladyfawn
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:46:40 PM AEST
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| Love the pic & the poem is wonderful :) |
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by arden on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:48:19 PM AEST
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beautiful nessa. so bittersweet and very lovely.
nicely written. looks though that somthing happened to your picture, or maybe it suppose to be like that, dunno *shrugs*
but the poem was amazing, as are all your writes. loved this.
5 stars
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:09:17 PM AEST
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Oh Sweetie......only you could make such a sad situation sound so beautiful... I feel you pain and I'm always just a click away...
Luv and hugs
Jenni
P/S..will come look for the pic later... |
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:31:58 PM AEST
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I agree, so much pain, so beautifully explained. I love the imagery in this.
Im sorry your so sad xxx
Love Dawny xxx |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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| That's really good. I like the "they are brown and I am blue" line. |
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:33:39 PM AEST
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Well Nessa, this is about the most appropriate picture I could possibly think of to explain the state of loss. It is rather like being a mushroom, isn't it. You live in the damp darkness with no light. Excellent analogy, my dear ladyfawn. Excellent!
Love n hugs,
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:22:48 PM AEST
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| A very awesome poem. I know how it feels when the road that people share with me diverges and they go some where else... |
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by TheVoice on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:33:02 PM AEST
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my dear friend nessa,
i wish i had the magic cure to end your pain. to make the world right again. you deserve more happiness than you have ever been given. you remain forever in my thoughts and prayers.
hugs
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by venkat on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:48:23 AM AEST
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Very sweet and very bitter..very lovely write..
Aaah..hugs Nessa dear..venkat |
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:23:51 AM AEST
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Awwwww Nessa this is so touching and so beautifully written, I can feel your pian and sadness through your words *hugs you*
takecare friend,
pixie xx |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:13:07 AM AEST
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You portray pain and sorrow so poetically.I get lost amid the words, but I understand the pain behind them. May your beautiful soul continue to release such beauty for our eyes to behold, and may we find understanding through your penned words. (((Nessa)))
Angel always...joni |
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:59:57 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful - Nessa - he will always be a part of you - nothing changes that - not even death.
merry |
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:04:26 AM AEST
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How truly espressive your words are in this poem. It is very good.
J~ |
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:14:16 PM AEST
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"love for you still lives in my every heartbeat"
This is the most beautiful expression of the deep love you have for this person....lovely verse..
WinterFawn |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:07:58 AM AEST
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how you manage to keep up such a high standard of work is almost magical, well done.
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by silent on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:58:58 AM AEST
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Really touching poem, :(
Silent |
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:07:53 PM AEST
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So sad Nessa, so heartwrenching....so blue.
I love the title......for you it is lengthening shadows.......Please stand in the sun now. where if overhead you glare, there is no shadow there!
Your wording is so eloquent and inviting!
Lovely poems you write
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:21:59 PM AEST
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| There is such artistry in your poetry! I love your work, babe! --The Moth |
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:04:13 AM AEST
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So touching.
It makes a person realize that it can be gone in jus a twinkling of an eye.
At least u are making the luv eternal in the touching writes.
luv, hugg, strength,
emy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:25:51 AM AEST
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beautiful
i like the quote in your comment too
PFR
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Re: lengthening shadows
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by colinb on
Monday, 28th July 2014 @ 02:41:41 AM AEST
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| Very touching Nessa |
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