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Disconnected
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Disconnected
From the world
From my family
From my friends
From myself
Disconnected
From my emotions
From my fears
From my tears
From my anger
Disconnected
From the one I love
From the one I hate
From the one who saddened me
From the one who makes me happy
Disconnected
System Malfunction
System Shutdown
.....
I'm Gone
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
... [
2004-07-18 16:40:47]
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Re: Disconnected
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:51:53 PM AEST
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| I like this very much. It really can apply to when you have a computer crash and all your friends and relatives and even your enemies are all online. |
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Re: Disconnected
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:35:35 PM AEST
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wow! i really felt that one! well done:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Disconnected
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:24:47 AM AEST
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great write, powerful words
pixie xx |
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Re: Disconnected
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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Oh how I wish that could true.
We were compters and no one could
reach us when we crash.,
This is an excellent poem, few words, but pack with meaning and feelings.l
Great write
Poetic hugs
consue |
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Re: Disconnected
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 09:03:48 AM AEST
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A different style, and it's good. Take care RhythmBndt!
Kimberly :)- |
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