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Leaning Toward Goodbye
Contributed by
horseluver
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Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Please tell me what I feel now
Tell me why I cry
Explain to me the hurt I feel
And why I want to die
Tell me why I hurt so much
And feel so alone
Each teardrop burns my cheek
Are these scars not shown?
Tell me why I have no strength
When I used to be so strong
Is there a real reason
To why I can’t hold on?
Please tell me you can feel my pain
And know that it is real
Explain that it is not too late
And this is not too deep to heal
Tell me you can help me
And want to be my friend
Explain that it will be okay
And you can help my sadness end
Please tell me that you understand
My depression and despair
Hold me like you did before
So I know you care
Tell me I can I can cry on you
And you won’t walk away
Can’t you read it in my eyes
That I need you to stay?
Tell me you have not given up on me
And you never will
Even after my mistakes
Tell me you love me still
Please tell it’s not over
And I don’t have to die
Believe me when I tell you
I’m leaning toward goodbye
Jessica Belfit
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2002-10-26 15:00:00]
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by XoIrishXo on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 04:17:48 PM AEST
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What a beautiful piece! My heart definitely feels for you!! Hang in there!!
XoXo
Colleen |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 11:12:14 PM AEST
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| Nicely done I liked this alot! It was sad as well,Good luck in life! Christina |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by Opium on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:29:47 AM AEST
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| I don't know if I should congratulate you or feel sorry for you Jessica!, but I sure will say that you are one of the rare poem writers, and you use the exact tools ...your heart and a pencil. |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by tiger_babyj on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:30:15 AM AEST
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| THIS IS A REAL GOOD ONE.GREAT JOB |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this,
so sad,I hope he didn't give up.
Well written. |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by Suzy on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:10:42 PM AEST
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Sitting here reading this knowing exactly how it feels...because I am at the point where I am leaning toward goodbye...too many people pulling me in too many directions and no time for me to decide what I want for myself. Thanks for sharing this...
Lasca |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by Marietta_Imhof on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:48:07 AM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. It's so sad though, I hope you hang in there. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I really appreciate it. Keep up writing good poems...luv...marietta |
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Re: Leaning Toward Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:47:21 AM AEST
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| awwwww jess this is so sad, hang in there aye, dont give up. look after urself and keep expressing ur feelings through ur poetry. and remember - a horse is a girls/guys best friend, i always find that i can go to my horse and talk to her and cry with her around me and she always manages to make me feel better, even if it is just by hitting me on the shoulder with her muzzle. she always knows when im sad. |
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