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I Keep Seeing You!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:07:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I see your face in front of me!
I see your brown eyes.
I see your brown hair with blond streaks.
You’re stuck inside my mind!!
I remember every detail about you.
I remember the upset smile on face.
I remember the tone in your voice.
I remember that you said, to not put my life to waste!
I can see your perfectly ironed uniform.
I can hear you soft and kind words.
I can feel you stand beside me!
Telling me I WILL be heard…
You stand beside me.
You stand in front.
You whisper nothing,
But that life is a *****.
I find myself crying.
To find your illusion gone.
YOU STOPPED ME FROM JUMPING!
You said that suicide is wrong.
You told me I’ll get through it!
You say I’m not alone.
But when I reached out to hug you.
YOU DISAPEARED…
Leaving me on my own.
I cried in the thudding silence,
Then I was asked what’s wrong.
I HATE those hallucinations!
I hate the fact that you're gone!
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deathdrop
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2004-07-18 15:07:55]
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Re: I Keep Seeing You!
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:39:10 AM AEST
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This is an incredibly well written, and powerfully told poem, and I'm suprised that no-one has commented on it. This poem is in a word brilliantly done, and very different from others in its genre.
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Re: I Keep Seeing You!
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 05:04:12 PM AEST
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Good job on writing this hopefully the tale is not true
The emotions come to the surface all the way through
Write again
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