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Burned Bridges
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:04:16 PM in AEST
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It breaks my heart, when i think of you with him. 8 months ago your lips were on his, and your body was numb. what the hell were you thinking?, the story of a girl who snuck out late at night. went to this boys house, parents were gone, yeah maybe she did more than just kiss. Forced upon this stupid populariy, damn he didnt even treat you right, never would see or take you out. all he wanted was some ass, and status. now his friends are trying to screw you too. movie theatre late at night, empty stadium. your pants go down and his ***** up fingers enter your body. god damn just thinking of him doing that to you makes me sick.
You Knew all long what you were doing, so dont try and make up stupid excuses. i dont want to hear another story of how they manipulated you, so keep your mouth closed and dont speak.
His pictures still in your walet, seems like your having a hard time of letting go. flip through the pages and i dont even see my own face. Boyfriend i would like to think i am, get those other people out now. because im not ready for these burned down bridges yet. my weak heart cant take anymore flames tonight.
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Re: Burned Bridges
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:17:17 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. Shows alot of angry & envy very well. |
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Re: Burned Bridges
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by kayald on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:50:49 PM AEST
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| Huh, do I know you or something, b/c I swear that sounds like my story only from another angle...im jk in a way, but seriously, I have been on the other side and i dont think the wounds ever heal....thanks for your view too, it always helps to know that people care... |
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Re: Burned Bridges
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:50:51 PM AEST
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Very much so emotional.
I think you can do better though.
Not knocking just stating.
You need to let this go though. It's not worth getting worked up over. If it is this bad just leave her be to her own devices. You can't make decisions for anyone, you can't change them, and you can't force them to do something.
Just a few things I've realized in life.
Besides you sound younger than me (22) so there is still plenty of time.
Back to the poem...
Very strong images here and alot of emotion went into this. My only real gripe is that it's written straight out and with some breaks could have been stunning... Of course with a few key word changes and all. Overall though it was a good poem. :) I just hope it works out for you. |
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