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Devil's Daughter
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:40:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Can you see she’s over there,
Sat upon the rocking chair,
Smiling & laughing at me,
Mummy she’s pretty why can’t you see.
I play with her every night,
She holds onto my hand so tight,
Tell me that her world is so dark,
On her head she bears a mark.
It looks like it has burnt to her skin,
She told me that Satan is her kin,
But Mommy isn’t he very bad,
She loves him as he is her Dad.
She tries to lead me by the hand,
Deep down into her Daddy’s land,
Her eyes are filled with black,
She promised me I can come back.
But I don’t believe what she says,
As I have seen her evil ways,
I saw her kill the boy next door,
She left his dead body on the floor.
I hid behind the curtain,
But she saw me I know for certain,
As the very next day she came in my room,
Filling me with fear & doom.
I am so frightened of what she’ll do,
Mummy can I come & sleep with you,
Will you protect me from the little girl,
Who tries to take me into her dark world.
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pixie
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:46:24 AM AEST
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*gets chills down her spine*
Wow girl,
making with the dark much?
lol.
This is great, i love it.
Kinda scary too. lol
Great write.
Phil |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:19:00 AM AEST
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krissy that was great fun
love hxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:42:19 AM AEST
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this is a really cool poem. good job ;)
~Sara |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:55:43 AM AEST
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| That was great. Very imaginative. |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:11:39 PM AEST
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| WOW love this poem much! hun this is an excellent write, so many images! just love it so much! |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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hauntingly brilliant:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by TheVoice on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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Powerful Gripping write! My hat's off to you. This is very good.
The Voice
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:08:25 PM AEST
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Powerful, dark and gripping...amazing imagery, I really like this scary poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Devil's Daughter
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by venkat on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:04:34 AM AEST
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Oooh..frightened??..nah..I am here my dear..
Sleep in peace my little girl... venkat |
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