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Murder In My Mind
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:38:27 AM in AEST
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I commit murder in my mind,
This is the only way I can find,
Without getting caught for my act,
Or making an unforgivable pact.
So this way I get my wish,
To make you an eternal cold fish,
I make you pay for the ***** you caused,
While I’m punishing you I don’t even pause.
You deserve every single blow,
I hate you & I really want you to know,
All the things you did to Mark,
Have finally shown you into the dark.
Telling April Mark isn’t her Dad,
Your constant lies make me so mad,
Using your kids as emotional toys,
You don’t deserve to feel any joy.
People like you don’t deserve to live,
As you have nothing but deceit to give,
You are about to get your just desserts,
Nothing can ever take away this hurt.
My wrath has been brewing for awhile,
As I see you bleed I begin to smile,
Finally I can get my revenge,
Mark’s broken heart I can avenge.
Never again can you inflict any pain,
As you take a trip on the reapers train,
Hell has no fury like this woman scorned,
I will make you wish you had never been born.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-18 10:38:27]
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:43:42 AM AEST
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Another vicious write, here. I appreciate you having to write them out, but I hope you can soon write a happy poem.
I'm not too sure if an 'eternal cold fish' is as dastardly a fate as you portend, but its certainly a remarkable image, which exists in a poem I have affinity for, as I have written about murder, in a more fantasial kind of way before.
Keep writing, pixie. |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:50:08 AM AEST
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*slowly starts to back away from you*
Woah girl
This is...uh...angry lol
I agree with Neptunes, do you write happy poems? lol
^_~
Anyway, brilliant write,
you go girl. lol
Phil |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:35:27 AM AEST
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Hopefully you can let the universe take care of her and not do anything on a personal level. Just desserts means she will get hers with you not having to lift one tiny finger! I understand your anger at her, but does two wrongs make it right? You know it doesn't and I know you're too kind to stoop to HER level! Be safe! And keep on writing it out! It is your BEST defense towards this emotion!
((((krissee))))) 0:-)
Angel always....joni |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:19:00 PM AEST
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woah babe u av alot of anger. though you have chosen the best way to vent it through writing. this is a good write though it may contain a hell of alot of anger. i like it.
keep writing sweetie |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:47:05 PM AEST
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| *Backs away from you* Good write though... 0_o |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:00:14 PM AEST
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Wow, this is full of hate. Am I correct in assuming this is about Marks ex?? (please forgive me if I'm wrong)
My fiancee, also called Mark, has had huge problems with his ex and their children. She uses them against him to get what she wants, and it makes my blood boil, so I can relate.
This is an exellent emotional and expressive piece of writing, with vivid and intriging imagey, well done
Love Dawny xx
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:56:39 PM AEST
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Standing really far outside the comment box with a megaphone yelling in, "get help Pixie!" Stress can kill you girl, don't you know that???
Rita |
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:27:19 PM AEST
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*is so happy we are friends and does a happy dance* lol, wow and wow, so human and so powerful, i think most people have to admitt to having similar thoughts at one time or another when someone wrongs them or someone they love, excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Murder In My Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:29:12 PM AEST
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| p.s. if you start by kicking her, make sure you use the *good ankle foot* |
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