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Free to be
Contributed by
8kiwi8
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:44:02 AM in AEST
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You enter with a few coins and exit with instructions on how to 'be'.
Those glossed leaves pressure you to be how they want you to be,
how you're supposed to be.
Your veins ought to be wire and the orange paste metal,
teenage society and 'icons' holding the remote control, and the moment you gain a fault or imperfection,
become socially unaccepted
If you build you by yourself you'll forget to add a remote,
you'll forget to read the manual,
you'll forget to add the pressure
You'll be free to be
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2004-07-18 09:44:02]
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Re: Free to be
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:01:20 PM AEST
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| That's a beautiful poem to post. I'm sure alot of teenagers can relate to the idea that society may find imperfection socially unacceptable. It's a good poem :) |
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Re: Free to be
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by 8kiwi8 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:31:06 PM AEST
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thanks:-)
well i can kinda relate to it, cuz im one that doesn't care, but alot of my friends from school are like that. cheers:-) luv kiwi x x x |
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Re: Free to be
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by diamond_tears on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:56:55 PM AEST
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| i liked this :) short but straight to the point. luv ya kayli!! |
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