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If I had the chance to fall in love again
Contributed by
Archie
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:18:54 AM in AEST
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Introduction:
I wrote this song shortly before I left the church I was going to. This was a very tough decision for me because I was a member for over 11 years. The fact is that we both made mistakes that hurt each other and in retrospect I should not have left. I am sick today so I will not be going but I miss them; yes I am going back to church again and it is there. The people at this church are like family to me closer to me than my own family. when I left the church I only had one friend out side the church during this time my mom passed away and my friend moved away -I fell into a deep depression pouring myself into my writing because that was all I had or so it seemed. I guess I am apologizing for all the things I put people through on the site during that time. I am doing better and realize some things I need to do to heal completely so that I can continue to write honestly. I am greatly thankful to the people who have continued to reach out their hands in friendship during that time, they are too many to name. Later I hope to post a copy of this with the notes so that people can have an idea of the melody but for now I am just happy to share this song with you.
(Song)
If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there'd be so many things that i would do
I would tell you everyday how much i cared
(If I could fall) in love with you
If I had the chance to fall in love
again;
there would be so many things
that I would never do
I would never raise my voice
when disagreements came
If I had the chance for love again
I must admit
that you have hurt me
deeper so much deeper
than any one could do
I also know
that I have hurt you
just as badly too
because i was untrue
If I had the chance to fall in love
again
there would be so many things
that I would do
I'd give all of my heart
right from the start
(if I could fall) in love again
I'd let nothing tear you from my heart
(if I could fall)
If I had a chance to ever fall in love
with you...
I rewrote this song 4 times since the original writing and could not finish it until recently
I would not normally share such personal imfo about myself but i think it was warranted and this is my answer for the untitled poem as well as "The winter of my youth" and numerous other sad or angry poems I have placed on site.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-07-18 09:18:54]
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:07:13 AM AEST
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A sweet song Archie, and very sad.
And dont worry about it, we all lose people and we all do things we regret later.
Nice song.
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:32:34 PM AEST
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awww... so truely moving, thank you for sharing, archie, its so beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:08:07 PM AEST
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When we look back on things it is so easy to say "if only"...this is an awesome song full of beautiful emotions.
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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Very touching piece. Just remember, there is One who is good at giving second chances!
Take care.
Andrew |
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:15:35 PM AEST
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First off, there is no need to apologise.... But I love hearing about ppl's lives so it was welcomed.. I am terribly sorry about your loss and I know how that feels.... The anger, the depression, the pain and all that comes with it.
Now about this song...it is absolutely a hit!! Hope you are feeling a bit better now.
Hugs
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Re: If I had the chance to fall in love again
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:08:19 AM AEST
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Sad but written well my friend. hind sight is always better than fore sight.
luv, huggs,
emy
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