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light
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:07:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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crawling towards
a flickering light
beam of hope
i pull
i claw
i ache and flaw
erring all the way
but never deterring
gonna grab that light
both hands
and pray
its that
of a better day.
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hannahbanana
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2004-07-18 08:07:20]
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Re: light
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:33:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I like the fact that you do not portray yourself as perfect in your endeaver to reach the light. Your few words grasp of a perfect purpose. |
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Re: light
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:08:54 AM AEST
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This is good.
Isn't life a struggle?
I guess we all have to struggle for the light sometimes.
And dont worry, you will find it.
Great write.
Phil |
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