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To Be Free
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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the watch on his wrist
says it is
a quarter past three
as we walk hand in hand
along side of lake eola park
I feel your eyes looking
down on me from above
we stop at the ice cream stand
to get us a cone
he just couldn't know
I feel so alone
your life ended abruptly
so tragic and sad
taken away by your own hand
I wonder what robbed you
of the dreams that we had
I would have stood by you
through the good and the bad
now all I have are the
memories of you and me
and a measure of guilt for
not trying to help you see
the need I had to be free
By Faith Mairee
Copyright ©
faithmairee
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2004-07-18 05:27:22]
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Re: To Be Free
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:17:07 AM AEST
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I am very sorry for your loss.
Also, please do not blame yourself.
Such a sad poem, but beautifully written.
There is alot of sorrow here.
Great write,
Phil |
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Re: To Be Free
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by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:11:54 PM AEST
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I once had a classmate who had this experience- a really sweet kid who was liked by everyone. We were like pals, even though he was a year younger, and I remember how shocked and hurt I was when I found out.
It happened after I finished high school, but when I look in my yearbook, it all comes back. |
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