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No Love, No Life
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:30:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to love but I’m scared,
Love brings hurt and pain,
For once my love was shared,
And now I am insane,
I’m messed in the head,
A freak of my own,
Even when it’s not said,
Through emotions it’s shown,
So better a knife,
Than to live on this way,
A loveless life,
Every single day,
Cover your eyes,
So blood you won’t see,
Another one dies,
But this time it is me.
Copyright ©
corrupted_minds
... [
2004-07-18 03:30:38]
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Re: No Love, No Life
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:36:58 AM AEST
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wow. that was great! it flowed so nicely. how do u make ur poems have so much emotion?
keep em comin
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Re: No Love, No Life
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:31:09 AM AEST
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Great poem, Love hurst doesnt it?
I also believe its better without it at the moment.
But i still want it...
Great write.
Good flow
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Re: No Love, No Life
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by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:41:08 PM AEST
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Great poem. i loved it! so much emotion and it flowed awesome. keep on writin. i hope that one day you find the love you want.
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