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If you had the chance...
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:17:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If you had the chance would you love me?
Cos my love for you is strong,
I’d give you the world and my life,
Even if the choice was wrong,
If you had the chance would you kiss me?
Kisses aren’t something you sell,
And I wouldn’t say we’d done it,
I’d never kiss and tell,
If you had the chance would you call me?
It could just make my day,
Make me feel like nothing was wrong,
No matter what you’d say,
If you had the chance would you come home?
And see what leaving had done,
The deepest depression had come over me,
Now slitting my wrist was fun,
If you had the chance would you save me?
From the scar's you create,
A lustful pleasure when blood drips down,
Was nothing but my fate,
If you had the chance would you kill me?
Can’t change your mind now, I’m dead,
I took the dagger and dug it deep,
Now bloods all that’s left on my bed
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2004-07-18 03:17:49]
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Re: If you had the chance...
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:34:56 AM AEST
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don't matter wat u say loz these poems r really good. I like em and u should like ur own work 2.
Another great write
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Re: If you had the chance...
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:34:12 AM AEST
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Its a great poem,
i do have one suggestion though,
its not a big thing but i tend to pay more attention to poems that dont have slang or shortened words in then.But maybe thats just me.
Otherwise i liked it.
Great write, Phil |
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