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Contributed by
nexxa
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:19:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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To compare you to a song, I would have to write my own.
But to know you for long it would have to be symphony.
To describe you to the blind, I would have to hold your heart in my hands.
But to recognize you I would have to let my eyes resend.
To portray you in a painting, I would have to choose every color there is.
But to see you I would have to cover it in gray and start again.
To write about you in a poem, I would have to know all the languages in the world.
But to read it aloud it would have to be a whisper unfurled.
To depict you as an emotion, I would have to feel for an eternity.
But to love you forever my heart would beat in obscurity.
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nexxa
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2004-07-18 01:19:17]
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Re: Compare
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by hooray_its_jen on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:48:44 AM AEST
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Wow, this is a great poem! It really made me think in some parts. Very nice write!
~Jen |
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Re: Compare
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by theMoth on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:10:13 PM AEST
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| The last line is very striking. Very nice--the Moth |
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Re: Compare
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:44:38 AM AEST
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| i fully agree with the other comments. ive noticed a pattern that you like to show more sides to one issue which is an excellent way to write. a person has more grounds to interpret, relate, and assume about. this is a very beautiful write and heart felt. and to bring in the classics of society is always nice, it gives it a more classy, beautiful, perfect tone. another excellent one, i dont think your writes could ever dissapoint me , they are too good for even me to complain. =] |
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Re: Compare
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by sheri on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:51:09 PM AEST
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| This is one of the most beautiful things I have read in a long time. Great job. |
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Re: Compare
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by JGB on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:23:56 AM AEST
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Very Nice!
It's beautiful! |
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