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Perfidy
Contributed by
nexxa
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Blood runs down my chest as I read your lies once again.
My heart begins to wrench as the agony begins.
The words burn into my eyes, turning them to ash.
My tears fall with the residue of the past.
Breath escapes my lungs turning them to withered lumps of flesh.
My body turns numb and I am immobile once again
My spine becomes gnarled into twisted boney vines.
My skin peels back and instantly I am denied.
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nexxa
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2004-07-18 00:37:06]
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Re: Perfidy
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:46:45 AM AEST
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| Oh, the wrath of heartache...I love the dark descriptions and imagery here...well done, this is a great piece. |
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Re: Perfidy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:13:30 PM AEST
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Thank goodness, I don't think I have ever hurt this badly. The torture of heartached and heartbreak is vile, for sure. Your word visuals here brought derangement to mind. LOL
Rita |
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Re: Perfidy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:16:05 PM AEST
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excellent, love this poem from title to last line:) hugs n' love nessa
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