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Epitaph of Disdain
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She is awaken with tears in her eyes
For she dreamed of her demise
No one cared or wondered why
No one even dared to cry
They stared down at her with such disdain
No one cared about her pain
As they placed her six feet under
She could only look up at them and wonder
Why didn’t they cry or even care
It just doesn’t seem fair
What did she do to deserves this
To be plunged deep into the abyss
As the dirt was thrown upon her
Her life passed by her in one big blur
When she awoke she began to think
As her heart began to sink
Did people really feel this way
She just didn’t know what to say
What did this dream mean?
Was there something she hadn’t seen?
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2004-07-18 00:30:20]
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Re: Epitaph of Disdain
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST
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hi i loved it and can relate to it.
love hayley |
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Re: Epitaph of Disdain
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:24:45 AM AEST
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| Great rhyme and rhythm. I liked this makes me think and wonder. Keep writitng. |
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