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whispers
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your eyes are the darkness,
Visage imagined,
Voice the song of the night.
I long to stand with you,
Holding your hands,
Feeling the passion ignite.
Eyes lost in each other,
Lips inches apart,
Anticipating embrace.
My heart feels your love,
My soul holds you tight,
My mind can see your face.
But my fingers are numb,
All sounds are hushed,
Colors have all gone gray.
What use are hands
And ears and eyes
When you are far away.
I cry out your name,
Call out in the dark,
Pray to the Gods above.
Beg for that moment
When we can know more
Than silent whispers of love.
Copyright ©
darkeyedman
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2002-10-26 13:45:00]
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Re: whispers
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 02:57:17 AM AEST
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beautiful, great poem, i too know about those silent whispers.
~jackee_line~ |
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Re: whispers
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:00:27 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem, i really like the imagery you use. i hope you find what you're looking for xxx |
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Re: whispers
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 04:58:59 PM AEST
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Exactly!
I had forgotten what it was like.
Thanks for giving me back something i had lost |
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:34:47 PM AEST
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great poem i thoroughly enjoyed it .... i felt the meaning and it touched me in a way.... good job at writting it... carrielynn age 17
(you should read mine plz) |
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Re: whispers
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by Twinky on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 02:58:45 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! loads of emotion in this poem...... very well written! |
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Re: whispers
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by deadxtired on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 03:45:53 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this! Great write! |
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Re: whispers
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:03:37 AM AEST
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Excellent Read.
Whisper
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Re: whispers
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by ammalu on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:57:22 AM AEST
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| good write - keep it up. |
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:25:51 PM AEST
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Definately one of the best internet romance poems I've ever read.
Such gusto behind your every word!
Truly excellent, touching and inspiring.
Thanks for writing it.. |
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Re: whispers
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by SnowB on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:21:45 AM AEST
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My heart breaks for you because I know these feelings....bitter/sweet...beautiful poem.
Lena |
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Re: whispers
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by HighOnRomanticore on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:29:54 PM AEST
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Bravo bravo.
Nice detail.
Great experession of emotion.
Very beautiful.
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Re: whispers
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:32:25 PM AEST
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| aww that almost brought tears to my eyes. :( |
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Re: whispers
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:19:28 PM AEST
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These beautiful words spoke to me, enchanted and captivated me till the very end... I cried out, because to end a perfect write such as this, is an end to all things... Absolutely gorgeous! I loved this! I can totally relate. It's incredible how you described my feelings so flawlessly. You have a lot of talent, my friend. It will take you to many places. Such a wonderful love, yet, you wish more than just words... You wish to see the face, to caress the cheek, to kiss those lips... I know; I feel this also. Awesome write, darkeyedman! BRAVO! Much love and respect! Pen on.
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Re: whispers
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by rosethorn100 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:41:30 AM AEST
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beautiful well written poem, well express emotions - i can relate this since i have been through the same thing , met someone too from the chat room and felt all those emotions, you wrote - unfortently it didn't have a happy ending.
excellant poem and good luck may u find the right one.
rosey
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Re: whispers
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by rosethorn100 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:44:57 AM AEST
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beautiful well written poem, well express emotions - i can relate this since i have been through the same thing , met someone too from the chat room and felt all those emotions, you wrote - unfortently it didn't have a happy ending.
excellant poem and good luck may u find the right one.
rosey
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Re: whispers
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by rosethorn100 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:45:02 AM AEST
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beautiful well written poem, well express emotions - i can relate this since i have been through the same thing , met someone too from the chat room and felt all those emotions, you wrote - unfortently it didn't have a happy ending.
excellant poem and good luck may u find the right one.
rosey
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Re: whispers
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by crow6279 on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 04:30:47 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful. No words can come from me to do this piece justice.. |
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Re: whispers
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 09:05:40 PM AEST
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breathtaking and so many know your longing
NoSaint |
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Re: whispers
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by missyboo on
Thursday, 18th October 2007 @ 12:39:40 AM AEST
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| its beautiful i to may have internet love reading this poem called the cards of a player i wonder is that possible on a poetry site but you should read it to located in the m section its my favorite |
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