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Victim of Life
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:18:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Victim of Life
My world is coming together
As others are falling apart
Balance for the life we live
The world crumbles around them
The travesty of life
You live and then you die
What you left behind
Builds the world of another
What you left behind
Destroys the world again
Your life ended another's
The travesty of life
The life you created
Is the life to be destroyed
The world falls apart
As the way of life
Destroys you inside
The travesty of life
One life is the world
Another death to destroy
What was left behind
The travesty of life
As the world crumbles
As you die inside
The death of the world
Leaves you to die
Another victim
Of the travesty of life
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2004-07-17 22:18:41]
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Re: Victim of Life
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:02:03 PM AEST
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I like this poem alot...well written....excellent job...keep writing
Lots of Love
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Re: Victim of Life
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:23:47 PM AEST
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tHis poem really geTs me tHinking! itS intEresting and a grEat WriTe
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Re: Victim of Life
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by pixie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:14:52 AM AEST
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Sorry you feel like this, but you written it well,
pixie xx |
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Re: Victim of Life
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by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:53:40 PM AEST
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This was an interesting view. I've never thought about it that way, but I guess you're absolutely right. |
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