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hanging on
Contributed by
darkeyedman
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Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Don’t gaze into her eyes.
Don’t press your fingers to her lips.
Eyes wander and lips tell lies.
Hand to hand combat at the kitchen table.
Teaspoons full of hate,
Truces uneasy, smiles unable.
Coffee mugs of blackness,
Conversations' bitter grinds
Leave us charting separate paths,
Plotting in our minds.
Don’t press your fingers to her lips.
Don’t gaze into her eyes,
Eyes wander and lips,
Lips can’t quite say goodbyes.
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darkeyedman
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2002-10-26 13:15:00]
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Re: hanging on
(User Rating: 1 )
by shepdog1972 on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:34:43 PM AEST
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hey this is really good and i hope to read more of your work.....the flow is real good also and it tella nice story............
p.s have you ever heard of allpoetry.com
its a real good sight also |
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Re: hanging on
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 09:08:59 PM AEST
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HI DARKEYEDMAN,
THIS IS A GOOD WRITE,KEEP IT UP,CONTINUE TO SHARE YOUR GIFT. |
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