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Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Is he breathing?
No
Poke him with a stick,
No You
Look his fingers are swelled,
Get one of his eyballs,
Not right
Thats sick,
I agree,
I didnt do it,
Me neither,
He held his own head under there,
Its his own fault,
THE GOD DAMN FREAK!!!!
Shut up...
Its for the best,
He knew too much
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2004-07-17 18:55:51]
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Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:45:08 PM AEST
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Eerie and chilling. Not sure whether I like it or not.
Interesting structure to the poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:58:57 PM AEST
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Definately different...a lil weird...but i like how u set it up...nice job
Lots of Love
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Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:54:19 AM AEST
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Murder?
"Shut up...
Its for the best,
He knew too much"
Very interesting poem. I think I like it . . .
Well done on this count. Am going to read the rest of your stuff. |
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Re: Finding Dead Bodies In Rivers
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:16:50 PM AEST
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this is soo eerie...but thats y i liek it so much...this is an awesome write...excelent job!!!
Lots of Love
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