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Mosh
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
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The noise you create is music to my ears
The growls and emotional words take my breath away
Left breathless, I'll never forget your sound
Lyrical, Emotional, Physical; Your show is madness at its best
Side to side, my body aches
Cracked ribs and maximum blood loss
My body is running on empty
About to faint, I clench my fists
Ready for pounding, I jump in
Bodies bumping, raging, hurting.
Broken shoulder and a busted upper lip
The pit is actively tearing me apart
Bit by bit; Piece by Piece
I slowly decay
Until I can't last in this place
Never...
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2002-10-26 12:45:00]
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Re: Mosh
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:52:45 AM AEST
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| i like your poem, it reminds me of how i am when i got o locval concerts and the only chick with enough balls to get out there for a beating. One word to describe this, Great.. |
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Re: Mosh
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:53:18 AM AEST
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| i like your poem, it reminds me of how i am when i got o locval concerts and the only chick with enough balls to get out there for a beating. One word to describe this, Great.. |
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Re: Mosh
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by poetic_tragedy on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:54:23 PM AEST
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1: Awesome write. To the other commenter, I know how you feel. At our local hall shows I'm the only chick brave enough to get out there.
2: Taking Back Sunday rules! |
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