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Stars
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The stars, they tell it all
They always have, since I was small
I saught my answers thru the clouds
Past the sky
Endless bounds
Wheather things are flying by
Just as the s*** has hit the fan
I still have no idea why
I can't put this trust into man
I've seen the sky all black and blue
Hellish colors
But always true
The world, so full of lies and hate
Only the stars will show my fate
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:33:27 PM AEST (User
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Heh. I wish I knew how to help you to feel better or something. Seeing as we're both in the same sad mood it's not really doing either of us any good to want to be with the other...seeing as we're both unstable and all.
*sigh*
Sorry sweetie. I wish I could make it better.
Love always,
Chels |
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:38:38 PM AEST (User
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that's really good. most definitely qualifies as sad, but the stars put me in that kind of mood too. Just remember that there's beauty there too and maybe that is what makes as sad when we contemplate the stars. because the beauty there is endless and in comparison to our world...
o well.. that was a blurp i just went off on. i hope you know that you appreciate beauty. take care and keep writing. |
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:41:48 PM AEST (User
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well done. |
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tarukar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:10:38 PM AEST (User
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That wasn't too bad big forehead. Nice work. |
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:48:00 AM AEST (User
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hmmm big forehead yea anywayz good write |
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Re: Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by orcanemiss on
Saturday, 31st December 2011 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST (User
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This is quite true. You can never tell when a person is lying. Stars show their true selves. |
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