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How She Left (Continued)
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She left this world
with slitted wrists
With anger, pain
and tight clenched fists
HEr empty eyes they see no more
Her eyes that once
Saw through my core
Her heart,
it will no longer feel
it's agony once wrought like steel
And I can't beart to witness
What is happening to me
I'm only living to see
What will happen next
All this pain
Because of the way she left
I guess her life was too much to carry
The burden finally grew tooheavy
Anyone could see
how her shoulders sagged
The way she would slouch
when she would stand
Copyright ©
iluvpencils
... [
2004-07-17 16:27:13]
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Re: How She Left (Continued)
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:41:44 PM AEST
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wow don't know what to say... very amazing.
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Re: How She Left (Continued)
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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Awesome write, even if it is heart wrenching. Very sad.
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Re: How She Left (Continued)
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by white_rain_angel on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:39:07 PM AEST
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wow this poem is breath taking..... its so sad....... but its really a good one
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