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ANGELS
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:28:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Angels rain down on me,
Escape from tears, my eyes shed
Take into your hands my hearts key,
Open the place for love ahead.
Angels hear my plea for him,
The man that stands before me,
Our future I sight, but my heart stays dim,
Opening, closing I choose to be free.
Angels I'm ready to take love in,
Being with him, regains what they stole,
I know it's hard, from where I've been,
Trust me now, let me love again whole.
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Re: ANGELS
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by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:25:25 PM AEST
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Awwww this is very sweet, with a hint of sadness somewehere in there too, great write,
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Re: ANGELS
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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oh....... this is beautiful............ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ANGELS
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:24:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful verse....lovely rhythm and flow. Hoping those angels hear your plea...awesome piece.
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Re: ANGELS
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:06:34 PM AEST
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I read most of your poems and they are all very good, but I like this one in particular. I love the way you choose to express yourself. Its very vulnerable.
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Re: ANGELS
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by poet_of_anger on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:27:24 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written, asking, hoping for love. It is obvious that you have someone in mind, and you love him, but that maybe you are unsure if he loves in return? I don't know, but that is the boat i'm in, well except opposite. m/f thing
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Re: ANGELS
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 05:09:05 PM AEST
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I really like this one, straight forward, to the point, I'm ready to take a chance again ... wonderful piece.
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