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Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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this body will never be free
shackled and bound
no one will help me cut the ties
these eyes will never dry
lost count of the tears that have fallen for you
this nation will never be free
shackled and bound
by invalidity
everybody is stuck in there own demise
no chnace of a true lie
there only chance is to be true to there self
take there life suicide
so many tears have fallen
for so many lies have been spoken
pain is the only thing that will ever run free
lives full of tragedy
eyes full of pain
mouthful of poison
truth down the drain
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2004-07-17 11:50:02]
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Re: free
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by apollo on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:53:37 AM AEST
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so true. is there such a thing as truth anymore? it seems that all the things we are supposed to adhere as "truth" turns around to be a cover-up. i really liked this poem you really opened up to your true thoughts and feelings. loved it.
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Re: free
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by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:56:19 AM AEST
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very good write...... really enjoyed it
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Re: free
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:47:10 PM AEST
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I love how you put so much truth behind your words! Another awesome write!
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