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Even When We Fight
Contributed by
PsychoPrincess
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:44:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Not having you around is no fun at all
I start to weep a little cause I feel so small
It's a struggle to have fun
It feels so grey even though I can see the sun
You showed me the great light
And erased alot of strife away from my sight
I feel so hazey today
Caue you're not here for us to play
I remember the first time I saw you
And then I saw beauty exsists.......it's actually true
Even we fight I feel like we're in heaven
Even when we fight I still wanna see you twenty four seven
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2004-07-17 06:44:55]
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Re: Even When We Fight
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by Archie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:20:16 AM AEST
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| Great poem just work on your spelling more. |
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Re: Even When We Fight
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 07:34:41 AM AEST
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| this is really good, i used to write poetry like this, and i'm not trying to act like i know more or anything but to some readers it might read like dr. seus or somthing which is why i TRIED to stop that wryming scheme, but that's just me though, great write. |
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