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To Lost Souls
Contributed by
Fwog
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Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I care when others doubt you
When they scorn the things you do,
Without ever stopping to realize
That you're just being you,
When you're down and feeling weary
When your heart fills with despair,
When there's no one you can turn to
Remember I still care.
I care when you are lonely
When anger fills your soul,
When you feel that you are slipping
And losing self-control,
When the ones that you depend on
Reject you with a stare,
When no one gives a damn for you
Remember I still care.
copyright(c) Fwog.
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Fwog
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2002-10-26 11:15:00]
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:50:04 PM AEST
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Dallas, this is such a heartfelt write!!! My heart goes out to these kids...and I understand your feelings all too well..
You have such a caring heart....don't ever give up on them...
Thank you,
Jenni |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by OreO on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 05:20:20 PM AEST
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I can tell this comes
Straight from your heart
It's very inspirational to
read, and shows your love
care and concern for these
StreetKids. For them to trust
you must feel wonderful inside.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by outsider on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 10:55:06 AM AEST
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| This is another good write, i look forward to reading more of yours |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by viola on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 11:35:28 AM AEST
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| it's fantastic you care so much, this is a great poem. |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by Lovingangel4u on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 09:09:56 PM AEST
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Wonderful write and honest feelings.
Take Care |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by OreO on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 01:07:47 PM AEST
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There certainly needs to
be more people in this world
that care like you do about
these kids, i admire you for
what you do for them.
Keep up the good writes
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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This is beautiful!!! I love it!!!
Ginnie |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by Roshie on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:31:15 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, if only there were more people in the world like you, life would be so much easier for kids in need. I have thanked you a million times already for what you do but I shall do it once more, thank you, and keep the poems comming I am enjoying reading them. |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:04:41 PM AEST
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| wish somebody cared about me like that this is a nice poem |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:05:13 PM AEST
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| great write ....i worked in a group home for six years and you are right these kids need to know that someone cares. |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:55:38 AM AEST
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| me too |
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Re: To Lost Souls
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:41:52 AM AEST
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| Great emotion and message in this one. Great poem. |
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