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I Don't Like it When...
Contributed by
Calista
on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:05:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I Don't Like it When...
you presume to know me
when the crosswalk takes too long
if the church bells don't ring on sundays
and i find out i was wrong
when my flight is delayed
if the elevator is stuck
how you always make me wait
and when i'm told it was luck
if i wake up too late
or get lost on the way
how i always lose my chance
and when you have nothing to say
when i'm judged at first glance
the perfect moment has passed
my hopes are broken down
and you leave me harassed
there's traffic in the town
i can't control my own
when a child is victimized
and i can tell by your tone
i don't like it when
the last thing i say
is the first thing i forget
and the moment i miss you
is the moment i regret
Copyright ©
Calista
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2004-07-17 01:05:57]
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Re: I Don't Like it When...
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by emeraldeyes on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:09:42 AM AEST
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| I like this...I can sense your frustration and sadness...keep writing! |
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Re: I Don't Like it When...
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:11:28 AM AEST
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i read many poems and some touch me deeply...but not as deeply as your write has touch my life not my heart but my mind....great job
tasha |
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Re: I Don't Like it When...
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:14:34 AM AEST
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| I hear you. Excellent poem, I love the sense of hopelessness here.. :) |
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