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trip through my mind
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:39:16 AM in AEST
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By a road obscure and lonely,
Haunted by devils only,
sanity screams tis not right
one black throne reigns upright,
you travel here but on request
out of space and through this mind
Bottomless pit's and boundless time
And chasms, and caves of dreadfull yearning
With toungs forsaken, but ever learning
'Tis a peaceful, soothing region-
For the evil spirit that walks in yearning
'tis there own Eldorado!
But you the traveller,fearfully through it,
May not- dare not openly view it!
Never its mysteries are exposed
till the human eye become unclosed;
So wills its King, who hath forbid
The uplifting of thoughts within
And thus the sad Soul that here passes
Beholds it but through darkened glasses
By a route obscure and lonely,
through my mind you have traveled newly
safely now back to reality
travel home for you are weary
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Re: trip through my mind
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:49:43 PM AEST
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there must be a lot goin on inside that head of yours... good write, lotsa feeling.
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Re: trip through my mind
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by kojikeneda on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:33:14 PM AEST
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very good write
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