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Missing You
Contributed by
kimmany
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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I miss..
your sparling blue eyes..
how they mesmerized.
I miss..
your beautiful smile..
that seemed to make everything imaginable worthwhile.
I miss..
your contagious laugh..
all this written on your behalf.
I miss..
your positivity..
which rubbed off on me.
I miss..
your wit..
as hard as it is to admit.
I miss..
your gentle hands..
the memories expand.
I miss..
your heart of gold..
never given the chance to grow old.
I miss..
seeing you face to face..
longing for one last embrace.
I miss..
the way you made me feel..
a piece of me will never heal.
I miss..
the way youre not here..
an ocean cannot hold all the tears.
I miss..
your creativity..
I miss YOU mostly.
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kimmany
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2004-07-16 22:30:00]
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Re: Missing You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:47:47 AM AEST
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lovely write, but very sad also...
pixie xx |
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Re: Missing You
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by 8kiwi8 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:03:12 AM AEST
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| i really liked the way you've written it, it's really nice, and really sad, i hope you're ok? i lost my best friend on the 20th march, along with another friend, then another friend on the 1st may, i have a poem for my best friend if you'd like to read it? 'gone forever'. anyway, again...great poem. x x x |
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