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W.A.S.
Contributed by
kimmany
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cried for you last nite,
I wish I could tell you why.
Maybe its the way you lie.
Maybe its the way you dont care.
While youre out there exchanging my hugs for drugs,
Im in here trying to figure out how things can change so quickly.
From learning how to tie...
To you getting high..
I cried for you last nite,
I wish I could tell you why.
Maybe its the way I care, too much.
Maybe its the way you dont, not one bit.
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kimmany
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2004-07-16 21:53:50]
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Re: W.A.S.
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:57:11 PM AEST
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| i loved how you ended it. Great job! |
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Re: W.A.S.
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by Jacquelynne on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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| i've been there...good write... |
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Re: W.A.S.
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:37:15 AM AEST
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| That feeling one gets from understanding (that 'high') .....change is inevitable..a thoughtful poet... |
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