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The Shadow
Contributed by
dysfunction_oral
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:53:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I sit with a being
Who's failed and caused this sorrow
He is the one who always follows
Listening to what I have to say
My shadow who walks with me
My shadow who listens to me
No one understands but him
Everyone can't relate but him
He knows how I feel
He knows what I see
This person is me
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Re: The Shadow
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:55:32 PM AEST
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| wow i havnt seen a poem like that before, def. love what your saying here and you said wonderfully, keep up the wirting! |
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Re: The Shadow
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:03:37 PM AEST
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| Very deep write. Great job. |
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