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make no conntact
Contributed by
MaRy_JaNe_420
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sit back, look around
Look in my eyes And watch my drownd
Don't flex a muscle dont move an inch
Show no emotion no even a pinch
make no conntact dont try to help,
Look back, now close your eyes
Watch your daughter as she slowly dies
Watching her fight with all she's got
Watching her mind, soul and emotions rott
Looking back with death in my eyes
Watching her as dies
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2004-07-16 21:20:02]
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Re: make no conntact
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:25:02 PM AEST
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| actually i do think its Great! except just do some editing, but other than that, awesome job! loved it! |
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Re: make no conntact
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by Lips on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:44:43 AM AEST
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| I liked it ! |
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